Nah I'd say that's fair. Akane's life is based off my own, but with parts highly exaggerated. It's hard to write what you know without making it a self-insert when you're a n00b writer lol. Thank you for the feedback tho!
Aww thank you so much! I do have second and third chapter complete, but someone suggested to wait until I have matching illustrations for it as well. I'm busy with school rn but I think I'll post my next one up by Thanksgiving or so!
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Not a fan of the setup for the game...
Doubly so when the text is blacked out.
I agree, there's a lot to explore like when you click on the red text. I mean it's not a bad game for that but it would take longer to complete?
It sounds like a cool game.
But where is the download? oO
(My browser have some issues with flash.)
this is so cool! although i think the fact that you have to hunt around for the links and stuff kinda halts the flow of the story
I dunno if it is weird but I kinda feel like you "put yourself" in the game as the main character
Nah I'd say that's fair. Akane's life is based off my own, but with parts highly exaggerated. It's hard to write what you know without making it a self-insert when you're a n00b writer lol. Thank you for the feedback tho!
this is so cool
i loved the game :)
This is good, I really like it! Are you going to make a chapter 2 or no?
Aww thank you so much! I do have second and third chapter complete, but someone suggested to wait until I have matching illustrations for it as well. I'm busy with school rn but I think I'll post my next one up by Thanksgiving or so!
Of course school is important, I'll be waiting patiently ^.^